Monday, November 3, 2008
Revised Thesis Statement And Introduction Due Friday October 31
Thesis Statement- Christopher Columbus, man of discoveries. Is Christopher Columbus a hero or monster. Many people believe Christopher Columbus was a man who was good at being a navigator. He's a great navigator but as a human being not a good man. I believe Christopher Columbus is an criminal to his day.
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This is a good start. You want to clearly state your position. You can do this by starting a sentence with "It is my contention that ..."
Grade: Satisfactory - try to include more information
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